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Cantus should be in octave-below-treble clef.<br> | |||
Bar 6 to end: Stanza 2 - the underlay does not fit metrically.<br> | Bar 6 to end: Stanza 2 - the underlay does not fit metrically.<br> | ||
Bar 8: Stanza 2 - ''ere'' for 'e'er''.<br> | |||
Bar 8: Stanza 3 - ''groaning'' for ''grieving''.<br> | Bar 8: Stanza 3 - ''groaning'' for ''grieving''.<br> | ||
Bar 12: Stanza 2 - ''ere'' for 'e'er''.<br> | |||
Bar 12: Stanza 3 - ''groaning'' for ''grieving''.<br> | Bar 12: Stanza 3 - ''groaning'' for ''grieving''.<br> | ||
[[User:Jamesgibb|Jamesgibb]] ([[User talk:Jamesgibb|talk]]) 15:53, 8 April 2017 (UTC) | [[User:Jamesgibb|Jamesgibb]] ([[User talk:Jamesgibb|talk]]) 15:53, 8 April 2017 (UTC) | ||
Latest revision as of 16:00, 10 April 2017
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Cantus should be in octave-below-treble clef.
Bar 6 to end: Stanza 2 - the underlay does not fit metrically.
Bar 8: Stanza 2 - ere for 'e'er.
Bar 8: Stanza 3 - groaning for grieving.
Bar 12: Stanza 2 - ere for 'e'er.
Bar 12: Stanza 3 - groaning for grieving.
Jamesgibb (talk) 15:53, 8 April 2017 (UTC)